A good book is a one that allows you to connect with the
characters. Most writers do this by getting their readers to feel what their
characters are feeling in the moment. There are several ways to do this,
including:
Body language
Inner thought
Physical reactions
Memories
Dialogue
Body language – This one is quite powerful. Body language allows
you to show the reader how your character feels instead of telling them.
He slammed his fist down on the table.
Her shoulders stooped and her eyes fixed on the
ground.
Inner thought – This one is a useful tool for getting across
emotions quickly.
How could they do this to him? He wanted to hit
something.
She didn't dare look up at the king, for fear of
losing her head.
Physical reactions – This helps to get the reader close to
your characters. This is the physical reaction your character has to an
emotion.
Dread settled in the pit of her stomach and her mouth went dry.
Memories – If you've set up a scene earlier in the book that
has a similar emotion, or something similar has happened to your character in
the past, then you may be able to use it to convey the emotions in the scene
you're writing.
He couldn't believe this was happening again. At
least this time he was prepared to fight.
The image of her friend's execution flashed in
her head, she did not want to die like that.
Dialogue – This is a quick way to show the reader how the characters are feeling. Be careful, however, not to be blatant. "I'm angry" or "I'm afraid" aren't very interesting, nor do they sound realistic.
"How could you do this to me?" he asked. "I should beat you black and blue."
"Please, don't hurt me," she said. "I promise I'll behave."
Dialogue – This is a quick way to show the reader how the characters are feeling. Be careful, however, not to be blatant. "I'm angry" or "I'm afraid" aren't very interesting, nor do they sound realistic.
"How could you do this to me?" he asked. "I should beat you black and blue."
"Please, don't hurt me," she said. "I promise I'll behave."
Try combinations of the above, and don't rely too heavily on
one method alone. The main thing is to avoid telling your reader the exact
emotion your characters are feeling. Instead, show them in any way you can
think of. You'll find people will connect with your characters more and want to
keep reading.
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